After editing out diary entries we read them to each other. Then we wrote some feedback. What do you like about it? Ask a question. Give a suggestion. With that feedback we added their suggestions to our writing then after that we typed it up to publish. I enjoyed it because my diary was a little bit boring and my partner gave me some good ideas to make it better. I liked reading someone else’s diary entry to get some ideas to make mine better too.

Modou