My Piece of Work – Madeleine

Daily write is when every day the whole class writes about a certain topic for ten minutes. In this week’s daily write we had to write about a furry, small creature with an elephant’s trunk and describe  what it feels and looks like. It is called a fuzzle.

I learned to put commas in-between adjectives and I learned how to describe a fuzzle and know what it looks like.

I could improve my piece of work by writing a bit longer and not using and so much. I could also put more commas in-between adjectives.

Next time the thing i would do better is to write neater and use more punctuation.

By Madeleine

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